I hate to be overly critical of a self-published comic, but this does have some serious faults. The basic story is fine and the dialogue is good too. The characters just need more character. They need personalities to distinguish themselves and make them unique. Same goes for the art. Use a wider variety of colors and make sure theyre brighter in daylight scenes than nighttime/indoor scenes. Use flesh tones on the people, for Gods sake! Basically take a second look at everything before you publish it and ask, How can I make this better? Read Full Review
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