The onething in this storythat I think can be improvedis thedialogue. It was a little bit cheesy and felt unnatural in some spots, especially where characters' ethnicities were emphasized. This issue was incredibly dialogue heavy. Personally, I enjoy a lot of dialogue so it didn't bother me. Other thanthose few spots of dialogue, I thought this book was really well done. I liked the story and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Read Full Review
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