While at times I found the dialogue to be a bit unrealistic, particularly between Philip and Maybury, I enjoyed this piece overall. The dangerous, fantastic nature of Shaheen is a refreshing contrast to both Phillip and Roger, who seem a bit too whiney and codependent. While the story was intriguing enough to make me want to continue with the series, the overall editing of the work could use some improvements. Thankfully these editorial needs are mostly grammatical in nature and should not be a huge distraction for most readers. Read Full Review
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