a little wordy for a comic geared towards little kids. . . . . . (but i suppose that's a good thing to encourage young readers?) . . . . . . the story was very silly, but a lot of fun. . . . . . . what i really found amusing about this comic was the playful sense of humor. . . . . . many of the comics geared towards adults seem to forget about how to have fun. . . . . . Donatello's deduction of what happened to Napoleon Bonafrog's brothers was a little too detailed and unrealistic. but it is a children's comic after all.