Thanks for the feedback, and I'm sorry CZ hasn't lived up to your expectations so far! I hope to improve, and that you will enjoy my work more in the future.
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Valiant Son reviewed Category Zero #3 Aug 17, 2019
A significant improvement on the previous issues. There are no illogical or ludicrous plot points, and the narrative is clear, if not groundbreaking.
In the aftermath of the events at Eden, One Percenters that escaped find themselves on the run from Sanaxus who aren't pulling any punches in getting them back! Neve and his classmates are taken to a maximum security facility called Omega.
Valiant Son reviewed Category Zero #4 Aug 29, 2019
Adem Kiamil is not a great writer and this is not a particularly original story. Kiamil relies on cliched and clumsy narrative devices, like a protagonist recounting an experience to deliver information. (This exact device has been used more than once in the four issues of this series). The story itself is predictable because we've seen it before on many occasions. I was excited about Category Zer more
As Sanaxus steps up the manhunt for the One-Percenters that escaped Eden, one of the groups being hunted finds themselves making new friends in the city. Meanwhile, Neve and the others try to come to terms with the harsh reality of their new situation at Omega, and Freya proves that she can handle herself!
Thanks for the feedback, and I'm sorry CZ hasn't lived up to your expectations so far! I hope to improve, and that you will enjoy my work more in the future.
Thanks for engaging with my reviews, Adem. I hope that you took them as constructive: I apologise if anything was taken personally. There is real promise in Category Zero, and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.
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