Good beginning hook, great building tension through the end. I personally enjoyed the connections to contemporary culture throughout. I suppose if you prefer to use comics as an escape from normal life you might not be thrilled with this. Eagerly anticipating the next issue.

Really enjoyed this one. Plentiful world-building going on here but I never felt overwhelmed, just intrigued. Found myself laughing quite a bit as well. Certainly set in a "broken fantasy world" but not weighed down by it.