6.5
Comics creation is really hard, and I truly respect that. This story continues. I am now looking forward to it being over, however. I was really excited with the idea in the beginnning, and it has really meandered. I bet this sounded great in the typed word version. The final version? So there is progress in the story, which is great. I hate to agree with William Martin on this, but his remark "Everything has a sort of 'first draft' feel to it" - is unfortunately spot on point. And let's be clear, it is really hard to come up with a complex first draft for this many moving parts and characters. Where I really disagree with William Martin, is that I believe Gary Whitta has the talent out there. I am hoping this series is just not playing to what Gary Whitta's potential actually is.
But on the other hand, this is a massive big break, writing this high-profile "BATMAN"-centric story for DC Comics. This would be the time to really roll up your sleeves and engage the readers. I don't know, "maybe DC Comics would only LET him use some characters and not others." We don't know the entire story. But this story should be better. The team should be better. In Issues #1 and 2, we had JLA-level leaders fighting an alien invasion force and since then, then narrative has gone off the road and pretty significantly down into the ditch. If these issues were to make us "like" these other characters more... HINT: that's not working. [Candidly, from what I have seen over the past two years, I have been giving real thought to apply as a comics writer for DC Comics, as hard as it is, if you really WANT to give the readers a good story - you can.]
And the racial remarks were totally unnecessary. They were brief, but disappointing. I know that it is popular these days. Sometimes they really make sense, and help address important social issues and issues in the story. In this case, I don't think it helped social justice, the narrative, or the story. They were just tossed in. We can also choose to respect one another for who we are. I am sure a lot of people will disagree with me on that.
I really like Gary Whitta. I really wish the best for him, and hope he gets a different, maybe shorter story opportunity. IMO - this is either too many or too few issues for Gary, and the pacing is really really off. Because I like Gary, I am rating this higher than I would for another writer, and I am being candid about that. But it really needs to improve.
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